Online Writing Lab       

Sentence 1:
Advances in technology has changed the job market even in the time between when this year's graduating seniors were freshmen.

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Sentence 2:
The team complained that they were treated unfairly.

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Sentence 3:
I love the feeling of believing in myself it's something I have never been able to do before.

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Sentence 4:
I did the research, Alex wrote the report.

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Sentence 5:
Michelle should of known that the concert was canceled.

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Sentence 6:
Most of the work was assigned to Mr. Green and I.

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Sentence 7:
At the age of 10, my father finally let me walk to school by myself.

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Sentence 8:
To graduate with honors, more than good grades are required.

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Sentence 9:
The historical role of racism in America during the past three hundred years is clear.

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Sentence 10:
The motion was lost in the first phase of the trial.

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